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Old 08-05-03, 07:24 PM   #24
Wi11y Na$D@Q
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ok sooo i wont get banned or thought of dic rydin i'l break it down lmfao lame ness anyway


13th- flow was str8 i seen alot forced rhymes u could hav fliped that shit he said in his convo way better. punches was decent didnt really like sum.



quote- bitchin to be established....ur crew just got adopted and fostered
alone, this leader needs more practice then unemployed doctors

^^ decent opener



quote-each of my lines fertilizes this herb...leavin him served in doses..
this cat couldn't go out wit a BANG!.......if he was datin explosives!


^^ was pretty good

all in all 5.4/10






H.O.G- u started out good flow was off and on tho. punches was coo wordplay and all that was str8



quote-in ur sig u say that 13th disciple is...blessed-with-skill-kid.....
ill fill ur cofin with my rhymes for battles....so u can also say u also rest-in-illness.....

^^ u said also twice in the same line messed up the flow




quote-sicks n stones will break ur bones,but words will never hurt u....then how come u get hurt-from-rhymes....
courts ajurned...ill bring money..n clocks...just to PROVE u aint worth-my-time...

^^ decent

all in all

4.5/10


vote- 13th





reason- ur punches wasnt hittin hard 13th had sum decent punces but he got it across.


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