Woah!
Nice verse my man, i see you've done this shit before and arent a newbie?! Lol. .
Great verse, topic was a little hard to get into but you portraid it well, multi's and internals were dope, nice flow mainly cause of the even bar structure, good imagery and emotion, second verse really out shone the first but this was a great piece, i thought it was dope, some of the best ive seen this week here.
Props.
Reply to mine:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=70898