Yeah, topics been done before, by us two, lol, but you've had madd block lately, and the easy way is to write about it i guess. Ehh at the imagery and emotion, you dont have it in these type pieces but what you do have is Descriptive qualities, and the way you express how it felt to be on writers block is what shone in this, a couple nice lines of wordplay but the "Im not losing my mind, just setting it free" was dope.

Not bad Tik. .

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