Sup Joka..
I just wanted to say I was feelin this piece and i thought it showed madd potential on your behalf..You really came with the imagery and the almost perfect choice of words, with a great twist of concept, really just came out nice, I thought.

>Crimson skies indicating a qiuet end, loss in thought, and piece of mind/
Brining a smile to my face with simple words that really mean more then the eye could tell/

Kind of moving actually.
Nicely written, I thought it was great.
Stay up n keep elevatin. pz.