Sup Content..
This seemed more a freestyle than a poetry drop, but it was entertaining to read regardless..
I've yet to easily catch the flow in your pieces, I dont know, the way you lay it all out on the page just makes it hard to catch, I mean ITS THERE, you just have to find it..I would love to hear you do audio tho.
The only crit. I could offer you would be to try and make your bars go together a little more smoothly, at times it seems like you're just jumpin all over the place..some better transition from line to line would solve that i think.
all around, pretty nice drop..
stay up and keep elevatin.. pz