Thread: posta vs mek
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Old 08-06-03, 12:38 AM   #23
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Originally posted by |[-neBo-]|


postaboy36 -

- your first line was not WHOA... so dont say that at the end of your lines. makes you look bad.
- your second line was tight though... good work
- dont say 'nigga' thats not respectful
- again it looks really stupid when you gloat your own lines...
- some of your lines were too long... but good verse overall

Meks-

- not good intro...
- some of your lines have me wondering what you are thinking!!!
- a lot of your words are made up!!!
- bad ending...

Vote: posta... its obvious [/B]


you took those words out of my mouth


hey will u go drop a honest vote on this battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...6264#post676264