wow. mortality is really good. must not be a REAL newb. jus new to RB. lol... i liked these lines:


Juss one of my lines will knock you out so you best find a "Bed-Spread" yo ugly ass couldn't be hot even if ya was a "Red-Head"//

Battlin me i'll make you see complete "Blindness" Soon enough i'm gone be RB's "Finest"//

See my punches powerful like a "Hydrogen bomb" you so wack i honestly dont think you deserve to be registerd to "Rapbattles.com"//

Your rhymes couldn't be sick if you spit them while you had a "Cold" Only way your lines would stand out is if you wrote it in "Bold"//


lol they made me laugh and overall i think u had the better verse.
ur really good. elevate an come try out for the Executives !