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i can't vote but this battle seemed tight styll...but synikill with tha experience will come on top...even if anthropoligy didn't feed n go ova limit synikill styll wouldve took this....
anthro- u need to get some experiences under your belt b4 u battle big tyme vets..like u had alot of good punches but some pretty wack punches to...kinna like u needed lines to fill so u stuck em in...lik...
"Culdn't be 'promoted' on this Website if ya 'Slepped wit the Boss'/"
^ nice ...but b more creative with your lines..that becuz of ur lack of creativity..would b considered played....
Fuck' this "Whore", what am I battlin you for?
Dont u know 'biting lines' is a 'Stealing', its Like Robbing a Store/!
Fucken faggot ur "Gay" ya "Swing Both Ways" like a "Door"/
LoL bitch let it go.......
U jus got "Stepped on like the Floor" and "Spit on like the Poor"/ (BITCH)
^^^ that whole part was extremly primary..im sory but that was juss ridiculously weak...those type of lines take away from your verse
i uno juss to point out a few ways to improve anthro...
6.5/10 ur mistakes took away from your verse
synikill- nuff said..dirty wordplay...i think some of tha best word~play i've seen on this site from a vet in awhile...
BUT i think u were flirting with tha line...when all tha word play n forced multi's takes away from tha flow...n everywun kno's espcially in text u need good flow to win...
"If "Eyez Judged this Battle", u'd still need more than "Heat" to keep "ScoreChin" to get the win//
Ya motha shoulda made like "Pig Legs" and had an "A-Boar-Shin"//"
^^very ILL start...((then followed by some ill punches n lay on words))
"You "Amount" to shit, cant do the "Math"? stand in the "Cold", I'll "Beat-you-with-NUMB-BRRR's"//"
^^^ILLLL.........
8.5/10 i think tha flo couldve been better...and cut down tha verse it gets tedious to read....
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