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Old 08-06-03, 12:15 PM   #2
Callision
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ok i'm new to this so I would like feedback

I got enough rhymes to feed the needed**I put guns on ya head till you start to get heated**and then they start ta spark ya**I don't pistol whip no more cause I gotta rocket launcha**i'll cut off ya knees and run around to taunt cha**Rhymes rude leavin deluged blood in ya food**you couldn't "BARE" the hurt if you
were NUDE**in an instance ya rhyme book is flamed and ends your existence**flip and hassle ya rhymes in battle**scattered cattle eat ya carcass and make ya soul rattle**leavin blood puddles, provin to everyone that Synikill is softer than Cuddles**I eat niggas whole cause there's no need to chew**you couldn't stomp me if youhad timbo boots**My text speak loud like bright colors**makin Synikill go hide in his covers**deliverin rhymes to infect ya organs, messin up ya focal to the point of distortin**importin rhymes to export ya mind**i'm like Tony Hawk always on the grind**you'll be cooked like a pork rind**no evidence left to find,jus a sign of defeat**and marks from where ya head leaked**