I loved this! The message you were sending directly contradicts the fact that Im reading this lol I felt strange reading it, because Im thinking to myself, he cant write?! But, hes writing this and its great! lol
It was so different, made me smile as I read it

i try to speak but the words dont come out.
im stuck drying up in this flowing drought.

I love this part, drying up in this flowing drought - You've used words that literally object to each other throughout the piece, and they only add to the bigger picture...Great, Great Piece.

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