uuuuh, not a bad concept but sum of the instruments were off, like the tone of the flute when it comes in and the piano.

same for the bassline in Plastic. the lines aight but i'd switch a different bass sound in there. the kick and snare in this one was nice though. liked that.

u usin fruity loops? if so try adjustin the pitchz.

keep writin though, my concept is just write, and write, and write....till you stumble onto sumthin tight.

check out sum of my beats and return the fav. pz

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