umm it was decent but it sounded really Dr. Suess umm i dont know whut much else to say except it sounded cliche and cheesy elevation is key, also read the friggin rules for the forum your only allowed 2 poems on the first page, you just fuck the rules and post 3 at one time with a 4th sitting near the bottom, "be smart dont be a retard" only tryna help, 1luv.