uuhh, it was aight, aight

er, flow was awfully weak, your rhymes were very forced, you can tell cause you used words like "shit" and "dick" to rhyme
be more creative with word use, dont just settle with the easy words to rhyme with

cotent was weak also, you didn't really talk about somethin interesint, emotion wasn't there and the went off subject at the end

keep rhyming, and keep peeping ill people's peices

peace