Thread: break away
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Old 08-07-03, 04:45 AM   #5
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damn, you been slept on

thsi was actally a very dope peice, imagery was great and very vivd, like the first two lines, i luved em
a simple flow but still a good one, you kept it goin`
content was nice, tho i did get a bit boring near the end and i lost interest......emotion was nice in the word choice tho, i liked that

peace, return the favor
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