Very deep within your own self, yet not so much so i found it hard to comprehend. But hey, that may just be me and how one can 'relate'.

An interesting piece though. The emotions were there, poured out to be washed in. The imagery strong, re-inforcing the 'sculpture' that one guides there hands around, feeling it out..

And it has been brought to attention that you left out half of it because you felt it'd be too long. I think you should post up the piece in it's entirity, and let this one fall into the nether regions of the scriptures. Maybe get one of us to close it.

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