In a quite rigid, yet not THAT rigid way, churning out constructed sentences to free yourself of writers block. I got a 'man suffering from constipation' feeling out of this piece...which means the 'writers block' subject was depicted fairly well.

Was good for what it was you were trying to do. No one claims it to be one of your top pieces. Especially yourself. It's these kinds of pieces that make up quite a bit of the foundations of a writer...

...resp...

By the way, i see this has gone up and down quite quickly. Away for 3 days due to the not paying of bills (they still aint recieved it, but decided i'm good for it, and if not...i'll be limping, but at least two of them wont be having children...er?!...). Shows this place has risen in activity...