Real Emotion Throughout This
The Vocab Was Normal But Your
Emotion Carried It,..Many People
Can Relate To Your Last Two Lines
But You Cant Wait All Your Life For
One Moment...Hitting Fifty And Still
Waiting For A Special Moment Makes
Me Sick...Im Not Fifty Years Old.....

This Was And Alright Poem..Dig Deep
Into Your Emotions And Pull Your Talent Out

And Reply To Others When you Have The Chance To...
Everyone Needs Constructive Criticism Besides Yourself

Peace

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