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Old 08-07-03, 02:02 PM   #20
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Feeble Minded
i rep U.T. & it'd take a tight crew to rise-n-beat-us//
but i heard ur sumthin special. .in the eyes of Jesus!//
1st ok, 2nd played but hit a lil
im gonna eat this herb like vegetarian spices//
unless ya flows generous& kind then mine's the nicest!//
1st blah. 2nd wasnt feelin
your shit to me, so do what you need-to//
cuz im nothing. . and none can beat-you!//
1st blah, 2nd could of hit ALOT harder
MEMO. . ya punches is played, future in rap is dim-yo//
& its no small feat. .ya bars is longer than stretch limos!//
all of it was blah
& ya rap couldnt get props in the Church-of-Jesus!//
now they a bag of letters. .ya words is needed!//
this wasnt good, didnt hit at all
he fought for the last word. . & took the bag from my hand!// 11
5 votes is needed. . & he cant meet the product demand!//
1st blah, 2nd almost hit but no
find his brain. . cuz this kids losin his mind//
if he cant see me winning hes stupid and blind//
atleast better then the last 2 lines
he's ill? must have a cold. . in fact he's diseased!//
verbally raping the regime like a knack to be priest!//
1st played, 2nd didnt hit
all their verses are just a slew of shit!//
im surprised they aint through and chrit (quit)!// (chrits in their crew)
uh, NO
this is like a george bush speech. . "the regime has fallen"//
them winnin is a long way away like a 1-800 number calling!//
wak for the last 2


W.F.
stretched bar style is old kid,trust me it wont get you far,
only category you surpass me in..is the length of your bars,
1st was blah, 2nd was very true[b]
take it to heart..not my lines but the sword in your avatar,
cause your rhymes just dont fit here, like 4 feet in a yard,
[b]uh kinda hit, coulda been better

act hard but youre soft,can never merk crews..you arnt dope,
give up, you cant hang with me..but heres a noose for hope,
1st personal, 2nd was kinda humorous
learn to cope with the fact that theyll never be an FM video,
in fact,only time anyone feels anything by FM,is on the radio,
i didnt really get this, but almost a personal
standing O,at least this kid tried but hes still just a bitch,
UT is still unrespected...those homos are still unestablished,
1st blah, 2nd was ok


OVERALL
Feeble Minded Came Descent In The First Half Of His Verse, But Then It Went From One Played And Badly Worded Concept To The Other. W-ill Really Didnt Have Much To Counter Feeble's With But What I Did Notice Was His Hit Just As Hard And Had Less Bars. BY FAR. And Im Still A Quality Over Quanity Guy So VOTE W-ill
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