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IP:
Mecca got this...
This verse of yours is a bit elevated compared to the last couple I've read...
You got in some nice wordplay, added some complexity and nice metas, but ya punches were a bit light.
Still, everything else helped it balance out.
By George, I think he's got it!
Multi...
What's with ya name?
I was expecting ta see mad multi's cuz of it.
And I didn't.
If ya whole verse had been as clever as ya "pink bombs" line...
You'd have won...
But ya only had flashes of defness.
Peace
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