Feeble's Verse

this is the LETHAL lyricist league, go where u need to be.
cuz only time he's gotten a W is after T U V! (lmfao)
ehh, okay.. naht as funny as you made it out to be

see, my lyrics 'enchant his mind' like puttin 'spells to his dome'.
when its time to attack he 'rolls over' like 'cellular phones'!
good line.

this maniac's gonna have a 'brain attack'. . and get 'hit by mind'!
he's like the child at the back of line. . cuz the kids behind.
First set was good.. second fell

kids the kind, to have no 'taktik' except for 'in his name'.
reach his only GOAL. . but instant messenger is his AIM! (its in his sig)
Okay i guess..

its insane, but its like a 'toast game' the way he 'roll play' faulty.
he's married to style. . and i cause splits like adultery!
had potential.. but no

use ctrlaltdel, like 'descendin components' he will fall 'part.
cant sell an album. . so he rolls back the prices like wall-mart!
okay finisher..

Overall : Not bad.. seen better... 6/10

Before the session....I must get rid of the BABE and expose my RUTH-less Agression//
Economy Lesson...I'll FEE and BILL ya MIND till you cant PAY ATTENTION//(fee + bill=feeble)
Played wordplay

Witness too many herbs that bit bars, so I come bearing an organic fit mouthgaurd//
Venomous spit left mouth scarred, 'Where to get merked today?' like RB-GPS Northstar//
Flowed well.. nice punch

Sickness in DNA traits, slash ya 'jeans' n' leave a GAP in ya family tree//(GAP jeans=genes)
Undefeatable Tendencies? *yawn as I breath* you Pussies Slidin' like Felix-on-skis//
Same as the line above

This shit like voodoo pins in your foot how this is a-tack-in-your-sole//(attackin your soul)
Expose your prewrits, couldn't spit off the dome if sitting on a flipped-over bowl//
Nice wordplay.. second line wasn't all that good tho

Spinal breach while I spit ill fluids from my whole Heart n' Soul, kinda like my Vitals leak//
Gotta viral-speach, your crew like 2 dead split Siamese, goin wish you KEPT THE MERGE WIT ME//
Okay personal.. bad finisher in my view

Overall : Good verse, good flow w/ punches.. 8/10

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