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Old 08-07-03, 06:04 PM   #11
SIC~WIT IT
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Originally posted by Born To Kill
Hottie's opener was just that...

Fuckin killer...

I wish I could say the same about the rest of her verse, but I can't.

The second bar left me like, what? (I got the link joke, but still)

Third bar had a kinda played line about "being next to me"...seen that alot. (did like the "punch track" line though)...

Third bar, tight, nice closer to that.

Finisher was tight, and hit hard, but didn't leave me wowed or anything.

Amby...

I thought he worked the personals well.

Opener ok...
"Tapped line" pretty good, funny.
"Chin" line ok, concept kinda played
"Illest Fem" line was nice, personal, and funny.
"Marbles" line, kinda weak, hardly anyone's a virgin, I'd imagine.
"South" line, ok...kinda predictable.
"Cottage cheese" line really nice, double diss, and made me laugh.
"Best/rest" eh...stretchin with this one.
Closer...pretty good, kinda insinuates that since ya know her name ya might be on track ta get laid...good personal...but at the same time, why'd ya wanna fuck someone as nasty as ya described in ya rhyme?

Gonna vote for Amby...
Made me laugh more.
Had better personals.
Good solid punches with humor.

Peace

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^born to kill...explained this perfectly..even tho aint feelin that fag..he took this battle..good drop kid....
vote ambigous..