I was lost in the emotion, I did not allow the simple structure take away from the piece, I thing the emotion was the glue that held it together. You can do some things to the transitions but that's not needed in a piece like this. I am really feeling your hurt and I am so sorry, I appologise on behalf of men, for you anguish, we mature at a slwor rate than you ladies, so it's no justification but just some insight. I too am guilty of this, but I did eventually mature, I have not looked back since. Wonderful use of imagery and emotion, your honesty is respected. It's not easy to drop something so personal, I know that for sure. Much love mija, hit me up next time you drop, and give your little girl a hug for me, kids need every ounce of our affection. Bounce..

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