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Old 08-07-03, 07:56 PM   #8
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I'm cool with both of you so let me break this down. . should be interesting.

half the sites on your cock . . . including your mom and jae
so i'm in a akward position. . . cuz for real, she likes it that way
^No. Needs rewording. The punch sort of makes it sound like you're fuckin Jae. .
i'll slice at your face. . .til you lay hopin for a few suggestions
my daggers are interested. . .and your hearts open to question
^Nah. Seen it flipped better.
take notes on this lesson. . .you can see my patience stop
your wife's got a pokemon fetish. . .so you turned to asian cock
^ lol. That was decient.
let the hatin' stop. ..let's make this battle a legend. the best one
cuz i have to admit you stay real . . .almost like sk!llz death was
^^ Again reword. . you're saying he is fake right ? But it wasn't as direct as it could have been. I'll give you credit it was ok though.
vets love to hate. . . your not worth this line so i'll shrug, your gay
for a loser you a 'primary' example. .and we can't get one thing straight
^^ Nah.
but hey, i don't care, just don't talk shit . . . and we won't fight son
i do acknowledge you don't bitch a lot. . .you just walk and talk like one
^ It was ok. Concept was good. Punch wasn't.
you've been dirtied . . . right now I can stamp in whiter socks
sand governs rb . . . and it's time to revamp the writer's block
^Nice. Best line of your verse. It was fresh.
so try and cop some self riches. Lyrical assassin's still an herb' that's worthless. .
and if your my meaning in life. . . . . .. . i just served my purpose
^^I've flipped it better Sand. lol

Overall you came deceint. Some indirectness and played shit. But other then that I liked it. Nice stuff Sand.

Fags are what Ya reppin, Sand wasGay back then, Forgettin?
But he Enjoys it .. No Wonder His Sig says He's BackSteppin'
^^Nice opener. If people actually get this then they will see the wordplay.

DS? Your losin .. Sand You'll soon See For Yourself
N' i Don't Need fast net Connections, to Hand DS-L's
^^ Oh. I liked this.
Duper sand as Himself .. Look, im Handin him Blows
i'll Step on a pebble .. and crush Your Mountain of Goals
^ Nah.
Ya Can't handle the Gold, ToNe's known to Split Foes
Sands rockin MetaSins avey, hopin to get Dick Rhode.
^ NICE. LMFAO
iM Sick yo, So Back down .. and This is the Last Call
ToNe's like a Hour Glass, The Way i Make Sand Fall
^ Ah. . ok
Ya wack dawg .. a No-Life Nerd, Wit Geek tendencies
This Reject Reloads the Page to Refresh his Memory
^ Nah.
Kill any Enemy, knock Ya teeth in, and then beat him
Whispered Win in your ear .. but you couldnt keep a secret
^ I liked this.
Ya flows leakin, everyone knows Im doper duke
Its funny tho, cuz even midgets have higher hopes then you
^ Blah.

Overall. I think you came pretty freshed. You flipped a few concpets but did it well. Opener was nice. Meta's avvy line was dope.

Vote - Tone-E

Reason- He came fresher and better. Sorry Sand but that's the way it was.