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Ice on the wrist and ice on the neck
I dont buy the cheap shit, or did u forget
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I was gonna say stop talking about shit you don't got but than you said....
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Everybody who knows me, knows i'm playin
I'm really not like, i'm just sayin
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Ok, but why you wasting your time talking about shit that ain't you?
Wtf are you talking about? Ran out of words to rhyme with or somin?
On tha real, ya shit was basic and all and I can tell you just started writing. Work on ya shit more and talk about real concepts that relate to you. I see you attempted to use metaphors and similies but most were played. Keep working at it tho....Ok drop for a newbie....about 4/10 compared to tha average.