I got a real serene feeling from this piece. It was smoothly done, you wrote with purity. Allowing a certain un-cut feeling to. Like it's there, raw, for us all to see. Not done up too much or anything.

Well executed. I just suggest over the days, weeks and maybe even months and years. Bit by bit, go over it, add on, change things. Stuff like that. Or leave it how it is. Depends what it meansd to you i guess. I'll shut up now.

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