This shit was real deep and I liked it alot. It was more of a poem tha way you had it structured. I noticed some inner rhyme scheming in there too. Tha second verse kind of reminded me of things too and I liked that shit and I could sort of relate to some of tha shit going on. I'd give it an 8/10 for tha reality type shit....
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lookin up has become a unfomfortable posture
so now i look down like im not so secure
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That bar right there was hot shit. Keep dropping realness.....