Word perfect's verse was ok but ya flow was off in a few parts...
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name me who feeling you i'll track em down as a hater-
and rip they taste buds out they tongue for the lack of flavor-
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Nice line right there....
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WANNA COPY WHAT IS HEARD CAUSE YOU LACK LYRICAL ABILITY-
when i rip you authentically pay me for royalties and disability-
life is a gamble i win at one of a kind-
you aint rollen doves you just in a wheelchair with a handicap mind-
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That line was ok but if you reworded it a lil different it could be better. And I think you mean "dubs" not "doves."
Tha hook was ok and I liked how it ended...
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ARE YOU IN FOR THE CAUSE OR IN JUST BECAUSE
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Blunt's verse's flow was almost perfect. Good shit and nice vocab...
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an' when it boils up, or down we still down with our roots
suburban or jungle youth, same shit with a different point of view....
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That line was good and had some real value to it....
Blunt's last bars had great vocab. I have no fucking idea what you are saying lol but they were fucking nice. Nice piece.....about a 8/10....
This would sound nice as an audio.....Give me some feedback on my shit "Get Away"