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Originally posted by Tha Vision
Word perfect's verse was ok but ya flow was off in a few parts...
Nice line right there....
That line was ok but if you reworded it a lil different it could be better. And I think you mean "dubs" not "doves."
Tha hook was ok and I liked how it ended...
Blunt's verse's flow was almost perfect. Good shit and nice vocab...
That line was good and had some real value to it....
Blunt's last bars had great vocab. I have no fucking idea what you are saying lol but they were fucking nice. Nice piece.....about a 8/10....
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