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Old 08-08-03, 10:37 AM   #16
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Both were pretty mellow rhymes in terms of impact...
Nothing outstanding, but pretty good concepts from both.

Sarkastik takes this by a hair...

Well, maybe two hairs.

Just better structure, things held together and flowed easier.
Punches were there, a bit harder than Tank's.
Metas came from both guys, but Tank's weren't as solid.

Tank, I know ya just getting started...
But the SARS line is played like last year.

Ya'll both need to work on making your closeing lines more personal, make em pertain to the battle and your opponent.

Make em hurt.
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