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Old 08-08-03, 12:36 PM   #2
deser_eagle
duh.....
 
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From: da dirty south
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sorry if dis shit is wack, its my first time


i'm world famous like ~Roc-A-Fella~(the person)/1

my rhymes are lyircal knives, they'll ~chop-ya-fella~/2

my flow is like a "chair" it'll ~schock-ya-fella~/3

fuckin wit me, my gun'll ~pop-ya-fella~/4

ya rhymes are played out. name one bitch whose rap don't say, "my guns will leave you laid out."/5

emcee thrill you leavin this battle the same way u came in...without a kill/6

you never gon' "hard" no matter how long you pop them "sexual pills"/7

niggaz say its a ~syn-i-kill~ but not physically; lyically. right 'fore you reach da top ya ~pen-i-kill~/8

my metaphors'll leave you confused like i told you to go "piss in the corner of a circle room"/9

[/B] Knock Out [/B]
You couldn't spit "sick" shit if ya lines were "vomit"/10
ya rhymes are all ova the place. swear they a "flyin comet"/11

[/B] Killer [/B]
i'm leavin you "speechless" like i ripped out ya "vocal chords" aww, too bad now ya neva gon' get accepted to "Warlordz"/12

[/B] Clean Up [/B]
Lyrically merked ya ass cuz ya shit is elementary/13
maybe dis shit'll pass as a poem entry/14
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