you sound dead...like theres no emotion in you wats so ever....and your delivery be off sumtimes, as well as your flow....this was far from some "roc-a-fella" type shit, no offense, just being honest....but just work on your delivery, and your flow should fall in place with the beat...and show more emotion my nigga....emotion is wat makes the song most of the time.....holla at cha boy....OnE




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