Aight this is better than ya otha shit but all open mics should never have any line fillers in them. Line fillers are lines that don't mean or say shit, they are just there for tha purpose to rhyme cuz you can't find a good line to put there.

I could go on and on bout him, but i ain't
Hopefully in the future i become a rap saint <===

This line was a filler and than you started talking about rapping from playing basketball. Tha subject shouldn't just suddenly change that quickly.

And another thing about ya flow, each bar was equal in syllables to each other so each bar flowed right, but you went from 4 bars with 11-12 syllables, to 2 bars with 8 syllables and then 2 bars where one line was 15 syllables and another line with 8 syllables. This type of shit is going to fuck up ya flow. Try to keep each line at about tha same amount of syllables throughout ya whole verse so your flow doesn't get switched up a lot.

This was an OK drop.....6/10