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Old 08-08-03, 06:26 PM   #4
GRaFFiK_NaTuRE
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u forgot to post the rules we agreed on

10 lines
no hate, d/r, or crew votes
no feedin
5-0 is ko
5-?=win
and i dunno how much pull u got here, so i'd like all votes explained

multis- G/F
flow- G/F
disses/personals- G/F
punches- G/F
wordplay- G/F

fav lines- "line" by G/F

overall vote- G/F


19 minutes of writing time

If you’d try sharin-yah-vapor you could stop grippin-yah-nines/
It’s like “im tearin-yah-paper” cuz “this pen is rippin-yah-lines!”/|…
Hmm maybe I shouldn’t-gang-wit-feeb cuz he couldn’t-bang-wit-G/
We could be “medieval convicts” and “u still wouldn’t-hang-wit-me!”/|….
See kid death is the only remaining-border and got saint’s-clutchin-weed/
N’ I should get “yah ass a restraining-order” cuz “yah shit ain’t-touchin-me”/|…
N’ I’ll bust-a-move-,-crack-yah-back and I must-aprove-,-that-the-fact/
Is that I “don’t need tah consult mad man” just-tah-“prove-,-that-yah-whack!”/|…
see-the-pole-bleedin-oddly-shaded red, feeb-yah-old-even-thog-he-stated/
You can “forget about hair cuts” cuz “I’ll leave-yah-whole-freakin-body-faded!”/|…


if u don't understand something feel free to pm me about it and i'll happily explain

good luck playah