Ya flow is fucked up in this shit, usually freestyles or keystyles are stronger in tha flow. You said some stupid shit in there that almost made me laugh, but that was just cuz tha fact that it was fucking stupid. Work on all areas of writing: flow, metas, punches, blah, blah. Don't know what else to say, this shit is like a 3/10.....no hate, just giving real critique.....keep writing and elevate.....