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Old 08-08-03, 06:47 PM   #6
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From: South Jerzee
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Damn i usually like to give real critique and shit and help muhfuckas out but this shit was fucking hot as hell. Good flow, crazy rhyme scheming throughout tha whole song. Alot of great and original metaphors throw in there. On tha real, this shit was amazing and yall should make this an audio.......9.2/10 cuz nothing is perfect to me......Keep dropping hot shit......

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why should i-im wordplay ullumnie-seperate the sky-with the theory of pie-
cause 3 out of every 14 rappers divide- into 4.6 that deserve to die-no lie


Nice shit right there with breaking up pie and shit, I don't think many muhfuckas even realize some of this shit....
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