This Was Good...I Liked The Topic You Put Down About War...You Gave A Descriptive Graphic Detail...It Was Very Good...
Flow Was Good And Nice Use Of Multi's...

A shower of red greeted my on rush to safety
comrades fell like dominoes and death faced me

Them Lines Were Very Good...Nice Description Of What Happens And Emotion...'Greeted My Rush To Safety'...

Very Nice Piece...

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