A very personal piece. Maybe too personal to critique.

So instead i'll say that you put a lot of emotins into this piece. Ones that may not be easy to understand straight away. Due to how they're covered over by real personal references. But once one digs, you get a real feel to it (not that oyu don't when you don't, but when you dig into it a bit, you get an even 'better' one..).

The honesty of this piece was what struck most though. The personal honesty of it. Hidden (maybe unintentionally) by personal references.

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