The Flow Here Was Dope, You had Kilal Multi's IN here..It Was Smooth All The Way Through, Never Fell Off Once.

LOved The Topic, You Described The Actions n' Emotions Throughout, Thats What Made It Readable...You Didn't Fall Off, Kept On it...

"a bitter pill i awoke to swallow it staring at the heavens
cloud passed by I was alive! deaths connection severed" - LOved That Line, NIce Wordplay..

Overall: 9/10