^that was a little bit of unecessary hate, don't you think?

anyways, assuming you wrote this all by yourself!:

the simplicity was nice, but a trifle overdone, in that it got repetitious. the general idea was nice, it's always cool to see people showing love to each other. the ending was pure cheese, but in a better way than soap opera cheese.
sorry for the half assed reply, but its not like you'll be reading it, eh?

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