na, i wasn't feeling it, couldn't get around the lack of lyrical skill, lol
one bar was short then the next was real long, you were explianing your logic and it went way too long on some lines, the fucked the flow alot. rhymes were simple and predictable

content was aight, it was coo and emotional, but you didn't say much thing interesting, nothing that caught my attention and just stuff already said everywhere

before you write somethin, t hink about comin to the table with something new, and interesting....use more interesting vocab and even out the bar lengths........you do that, you'll be iLL