Smoothly dark. Taking one through the emotions and thoughts of yourself through your eyes.

In an extreme way, depicting some of the wrongs of modern day world. More to the point, of modern day humanity.

Though at times you lightly trod. I thought the way you went with this piece, you could've dug much further and extensively. But nonetheless, what you did dig into, the general area, it was fucking good..

I enjoyed reading this. I nod my head at some of the things said. Also some of the subtlety used to concentrate on certain things also appreciated...

Ended very nicely. I looked at this with very little cynicism, making the ending even more effective.

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