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IP:
Either you're talking about Nostradamus or the Mary prophecies.
Or you're own ones. i.e. you're work as a writer/emcee.
Imagery held well. It wasn't there in abundance, but more so in the background. Nice use of vocabulary. And some very well constructed lines. Like the morning dew one.
I liked. To me it depicted the anguish of a struggling artist. Who is trying to get his word across. But it falls on deaf ears. He/she then resorts to a 'desperate scream, yet of course, that also falls upon deaf ears. Therefore, it becomes a silent scream. This is your silent scream.
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