Well Structures All The Way Through Looking At It...

"Would" Instead Of "Might" In Your Third Line
Sounds A Tad Better But Its Your Poem And
Good So Far.....
Decent Imagery In Your Fourth Line...

~To know the difference in what's good
and evil and take what's in between
The appearance of these eyes yet older,
too young for what they've seen
So forcefully thrust into what is and isn't,
then told to come clean...~

Many Can Relate To Growing Up Quickly
In Reference To Drugs..Child mollestation...
Loss Of Familia..Anything For That Matter...

Dunno where this came from or why it came out...

~The Way You Conduct Yourself In Certain Enviorments May~
~Make You More Than A Girl....More Than A Woman~

~It Came From Your Heart Girl..And You Cant Stop That~
~Cant Deny Talent Either..Which You Displayed In Ways~
~You Only Know How.....Alright Emotional Piece..Peace~

~Content~