yes u do it is very important ta do tha write what you know


Flow: it was good had very nice strucuture n im startin ta really like yur style more n more it had complexity n was creative even tho this is a heavily used topic, some other cats jus don get emotion in it they jus write what comes to mind u it came fro the heart n it was deep, you stated what all the other people around you would feel like n told the story as if it really would happen the effect not only to u (most cats jus focus on on person)

Wordplay/Vocab: it was strong it was a mixture of complex n simple words makes your style even more unique

Topic heavily used but like i said u pulle threw n made this piece stick out n make it unique, n like you said, you write what you know


Critisim: not much here but the fact tha it coulda used more raw emotion n flow (gotta gve ya somethinto work on , n a person never has enough raw emotion)


Overal: 8/10



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