yea I looked back at that and read it, it does sound better like that... thank you for the complements and the feedback. To Syndicate I'm 16... but I smell ya on that baby ish cause my best friend is a month older than me and got 5 weeks until her baby is due. But thank you very much, this was an emotional peice, an pretty much a peice that meant more to me than some of the others did... thanks (p.s. they'll get better commin outta a looooong writer's block) Peace