felony - not a bad verse..but the net 'gangsta' shit has been played out for awhile now..unless u can really flip it..and make it different than whats already been done..almost every line in ur verse ive read before..flow was ok..real simple..up ya multis and ya vocab..not a bad verse..but like i said..the internet shoot em up bang bang shit has been played..show some versatility..switch ya topics up..u got the basics it seems..just take it to the next level..

w.p. - what up word..ok..a lil different from ur last 1 i read..u must ave some built up anger..cuase everythig i read from u is of the same topic..like u mad at the board or somethin..flow was pretty good tho..could use some work on ya multis..but not bad..some ok lines..but ur spell n and grammar was get n on my nerves..clean that up..and itll be a better read..still good tho..got a few quotables in there..i wanna read somethin different from u tho..somethin other than a diss..or anything like this..

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