like word said..this lacked a lil..a good read..some nice lines..nice ideas..just didnt throw it all together as good as i think u couldve..it told a lot..real informative..kinda funny in some parts..it was just simple..the flow was real simple..add some multis..spice it up a bit..and work on ya spell n..some lines just didnt make sense to me..

i scarface dead?..save both these franchise?..

not bad tho..a good read..