I liked this, there was a hint of wisdom in the short simplicity of this peice, you know like in movies when they go to the wise (oracle or whoever else) and they say something simple that doesn't seem like a whole lot until the end... haha I'm done babbeling on that, hope you got me, if not don't feel bad, most people don't... I loved the shortness of the lines and the depth they seemed to hold, that is something that not everyone can capture but you have done it well. You are a good writer, I enjoyed this very much, I'll be lookin forward to reading more of your work, peace.

Ps. Welcome to RB, and I'm lovin tha name...