the piece is straightfoward and honest not to mention EXTREMELY EMOTIONAL. on that note i'd give this a 9/10. now based on the way it was written, i'd have to say i wasn't feeling the way the words were put, there was no continuity and i was never sure if you were ryhmin' or not. so based on that i'd give the format a 4/10. the topic has been done before but it was nice with the emotion.all in all i'd give this a 5/10 keep working at it. 1