yo, i was dissapointed by both... bash your first verse didn't have a rhyme until the 4th line... an' i must say the rest was pretty weak as well... your wordplay, vocab an' flow were off.. even for a gangsta track..

west's verse's were better but still lacked a solid flow, the wordplay was a'ight but pretty weak, vocab was good, overall you were the #1 in this, but still could've done better....

I know both of you can do better.. peace

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